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Post by Tony The Jabroni on Oct 20, 2015 12:02:30 GMT -5
Working on Episode Two now!
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Post by Tony The Jabroni on Oct 20, 2015 14:50:49 GMT -5
Fox has announced more recurring characters. Ryan Kwanten will play Barry Byrd Eric Bana will play Miles Everworth
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Post by Tony The Jabroni on Oct 20, 2015 14:51:51 GMT -5
Episode Two is done(Last post on Page 1)
Episode Three will be out in the next few days!
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Post by Tony The Jabroni on Oct 22, 2015 12:14:10 GMT -5
Episode Three Vigilante
|Scene One| It's the weekend and Peter is sitting in his room. Peter sighs of boredom and decides to take out a sketch book. Peter begins drawing when a knock is heard at his door. Peter opens in and there stands his Uncle Ben. Ben walks in and sits on Peter's bed before motioning for Peter to sit down next to him which he does.
Uncle Ben: "Peter, I know you're going through a lot but remember that project I wanted your help with? I still need your help with it."
Peter Parker: "You're right! I am going through a lot and you wouldn't even begin to understand it which is why I can't help you with your stupid project!"
Uncle Ben: "What's gotten into you Peter? You use to love helping me with stuff and now you call it stupid?"
Peter Parker: "Key-word is used to. I've grown up and I would appreciate some space."
Uncle Ben: "I understand that and I know that I'm not your father but..."
Peter Parker: "Then why are you pretending to be!?"
Peter grabs his jacket and walks out of his room before rushing down the stairs and out the door. Ben still sitting on Peter's bed looks heartbroken but sucks it up and walks down stairs. He walks into the kitchen and looks at his wife May before sighing.
Uncle Ben: "Where did I go wrong in raising that boy?"
Aunt May: "You did everything right, he's a teenager now Ben. A teenagers job is to defy his parents or in this case his guardians."
Ben sits down and shakes his head in agreement.
|End Scene| _______________________________ |Scene Two|
Norman is at Oscorp in the meeting room sitting down waiting for a meeting to start when his secretary walks in.
Secretary: "Mr. Osborn, Mayor Hook is here to see you."
Norman Osborn: "Send him in Lidia."
Lidia leaves the room and a few seconds later Mayor Blake Vincent Hook walks in and smiles at Norman. Norman points at a seat and the Mayor sits down.
Mayor Hook: "Norman good to see you old friend."
Norman Osborn: "Good to see you to Blake. What can I do for you?"
Mayor Hook: "Well that's a good question Norman. I'll just flat out say it. I can't help get the police off you anymore Norman."
Norman Osborn: "Why is money the issue? Cause I can pay your more if you need it."
Mayor Hook: "No, Norman money isn't the issue it's just that George Stacy has been poking around ever since I helped you last time and I can't risk him finding out that I'm helping you cover up whatever it is you're doing here! Not with re-election coming up anyways."
Norman Osborn: "What if I took care of Mr. Stacy?"
Mayor Hook: "If you managed to get George off my back then I would have no reason to not help you."
Norman smirks and nods. Mayor Hook stands up as does Norman they shake hands before Mayor Hook leaves. Norman sits back down. He then buzzes his Secretary Lidia on the phone sitting on the table.
Norman Osborn: "Lidia could use please contact Elektra and tell her that I need her services!"
Norman sits back in his seat again and smirks as everyone begins to walk in for the meeting.
|End Scene| _______________________________ |Scene Three|
Peter is walking around downtown when he sees a man grab a ladies purse and knock her down in the process. Peter goes to do something about it but stops because everyone would be able to see him use his powers so instead he keeps on walking and sees a clothing store so he walks in. Peter buys a black shirt and ski mask he then goes in an alley and puts it on. Peter then uses his web powers to swing from roof to roof looking for crime he can stop. Peter sees the man who stole the ladies purse so he swings into action. Peter lands behind the guy and kicks him in the back which causes the guy to go face first on the sidewalk. The man then gets up and tries to fight back but Peter dodges every punch the man throws. The man realizing that he stands no chance drops the purse and tries to run off but Peter grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a trash can on the side of the street before looking at a lady and telling her to call the cops. Peter then grabs the purse and begins looking for the lady who it belongs to. Peter finally sees the lady after looking for a few hours and drops in front of her. Peter hands her the purse and she looks happy.
Lady: "Thank You!"
Peter Parker: "No Problem, Miss."
Lady: "Wait who are you?"
Peter Parker: "Just some masked guy looking to help people just like you!"
Peter then webs off to find more people to help.
|End Scene| _______________________________ |Scene Four|
Back at Peter's house Uncle Ben is watching TV when Aunt May walks in and sits on the couch next to him.
Uncle Ben: "Peter's been gone all day. I'm starting to worry May."
Aunt May: "There's no reason to worry Ben, Peter just needs to blow off some steam."
Uncle Ben: "I know you're right but still it's been all day. How much steam does he need to blow off?"
Aunt May: "You were a teenager once. You know what he's feeling. If I remember right you ran away for two days to blow off some steam."
Uncle Ben: "Yeah. But I don't want Peter to be gone for days. I'm gonna go look for him and tell him that I'm sorry."
Aunt May: "Fine dear but dinner will be done soon."
Uncle Ben: "Save me some!"
Ben laughs before grabbing his car keys and leaving the house. He gets in his car and pulls out of the driveway and begins his search for Peter.
|End Scene| _______________________________ |Scene Five|
Peter lands in an alley and takes off the mask before walking into a convenience store. He grabs a bottle of soda and a bag of chips. Peter places the stuff on the counter and the owner rings him up. Peter takes all the money he has left from his jacket pocket and places it on the counter. The owner counts it out and shakes his head.
Owner: "Hey Kid you're a dime short."
Peter Parker: "So? Can't I just come back tomorrow with it?"
Owner: "No you can't. No dime now means no soda and chips."
Peter looks frustrated and begins to leave the store when a masked man comes rushing in with a gun. The man motions for Peter to back it up before pointing the gun at the owner.
Masked Man: "All the money NOW!"
The owner who looks scared begins shuffling all the money into a bag and hands it to the man. The man then storms out of the store and begins running down the street. Peter's Uncle Ben sees the man and tries to stop him but in the process the man's gun goes off. Peter hears gun fire and runs out of the store and towards the direction it came from. Peter sees a man laying on the sidewalk and as he approaches he realizes it's his Uncle. Peter kneels down next to him and begins sobbing.
Peter Parker: "Uncle Ben. Hold on please hold on. I'm sorry for what I said. Please don't leave me!"
Uncle Ben: "Peter!"
Ben smiles at Peter before closing his eyes and dying. Peter screams as tears fall from his face. Peter gets up crying but clearly angry. He begins walking towards his house when he stops to look at a poster featuring lucha libres. Peter nods and begins walking once more. |End Scene| _______________________________ |Final Scene|
Peter arrives home and walks into the house. His Aunt May greets him and Peter tells her what happened. She begins crying as Peter comforts her. Aunt May then sits down as Peter runs upstairs. He takes out his Sketch book once more and begins drawing. Peter finishes the drawing and his Aunt walks in.
Aunt May: "Peter, that project your Uncle Ben was talking about wasn't a project at all. But that's all I'm gonna say. If you want to know more then you'll find answers in the basement."
May leaves the room and Peter covers his Sketch book up with his blanket before leaving the room himself. Peter makes his way into the basement where he sees a DVD. He places the DVD into the DVD player and it begins to play.
Richard Parker: "Peter, I don't have long so I'll just say this. Son, I know one day you'll be a great man and a man with power and I hope you see this before that day before I have some fatherly advice for you. With Great Power comes Great Responsibility!"
The DVD ends and Peter smiles. He then runs back upstairs to his room.
3 MONTHS LATER
Peter is on a rooftop, he smiles before putting on a mask and webbing off as Spider-Man |End Episode|
Guest Stars Tom Selleck as Mayor Blake Vincent Hook Denis Leary as Richard Parker
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Post by Jigsaw on Oct 23, 2015 15:47:54 GMT -5
I like how you're building Peter Parker up and not making it all just about Spider-Man yet. I can't help but think that the venom oscorp is working on will eventually make Norman become my all time favorite marvel villain the Green Goblin.
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Post by Tony The Jabroni on Oct 24, 2015 11:18:32 GMT -5
Before I start Ep. 3, I would just like to know if whoever reads this would like to see me expand this universe with other hero shows?
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Post by Jigsaw on Oct 24, 2015 12:03:55 GMT -5
Before I start Ep. 3, I would just like to know if whoever reads this would like to see me expand this universe with other hero shows? That's what I'm doing. I'm going to expand my marvel univwrse through Hydra's Web. It'd be cool if you did it to. We could compare our marvel universes
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Post by Tony The Jabroni on Oct 24, 2015 19:09:08 GMT -5
Episodes 3 & 4 will be out tomorrow!!
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Post by --------- on Oct 24, 2015 22:57:09 GMT -5
Before I start Ep. 3, I would just like to know if whoever reads this would like to see me expand this universe with other hero shows? Yeah could be cool depending on what you do next.
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Post by Tony The Jabroni on Oct 25, 2015 12:31:04 GMT -5
Working on Ep. 3 now!
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Post by Tony The Jabroni on Oct 25, 2015 13:32:18 GMT -5
Ep. 3 is now done. Gave a pretty big hint on the next hero to enter my universe. I will begin episode four later today!
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Post by --------- on Oct 26, 2015 3:59:39 GMT -5
I like what you've done with it so far but I'm glad you've got the origin out of the way. You can get to the good stuff now.
BTW I noticed the hint.
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Post by Tony The Jabroni on Oct 29, 2015 18:58:26 GMT -5
Been busy these past few days but Ep. 4 will be out sometime tomorrow!
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Post by Tony The Jabroni on Nov 7, 2015 12:59:20 GMT -5
I know I said this would be up by now but shit happens and now with Black Ops 3 out this is gonna take a backseat until the honeymoon experience is over but this will continue!
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Post by Tony The Jabroni on Nov 18, 2015 0:21:54 GMT -5
Just bumping to say this will continue. Honeymoon with B-Ops 3 is almost over!
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